Hi!
This week we are going to read about Jamie Oliver, a very famous British chef. We will find that he is not only a great chef but he also runs several charities. If you are into cooking, why don't you click here and leave your recipes or comment on other people's recipes and ideas? I think this can help you improve your writing skills, plus you might also make friends with Jamie's fans all around the world. I've already become a member and left a post. Find it. What do I talk about?
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You talked about mum’s cooking. You said is wonderfull when Mun go to home and cooked, but the food is not same when you cook. I think your food must be similar to your MOM. Always learn something.
I like a my mother’s soup
From :Luz
Thank you Luz. Some mistakes:
- You said it is wonderful when mum goes home and cooks but the food doesn´t taste the same
- your food must be similar to your mum's
- You always learn something
- I like my mother's soup
Keep writing!
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